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Poetry Friday: “First Last Dance”

poetryfridaybutton-fulllThis is something I wrote almost exactly two years ago for a proposed children’s poetry anthology that was to spotlight the changes (emotional and physical) that middle-graders go through on their way towards puberty and beyond. Unfortunately, the editors were not able to pull the book together, so this poem never got to see the light of day. I’m not sure why I never shared it here, but I liked it and thought I’d give it an opportunity to have an audience.

This is semi-autobiographical, and my hope was that I was not alone in my experiences and that other adults would be able to relate to it, as well – and of course, that it would be something of a learning experience or teaching opportunity for parents and kids alike. I hope it brings back a memory or two.

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First Last Dance

I’m not sure why I came tonight.
I’m not sure why I’m here.
A new kid at a new school
at the first dance of the year.
I have no friends to speak of yet
or fancy clothes to wear;
I’m kind, polite,
don’t like to fight,
but no one seems to care.

The last song starts to play; a swarm
of students fills the floor.
I breathe a >sigh< and turn to leave –
when heading toward the door,
I’m halted by a stunning beauty
rising from her chair.
I don’t know why
but she says ‘hi’…
and soon we’re dancing there.

She lets me hold her in my arms
(I hope I do this right)
my heart is racing madly; music
slowly fills the night.
Her soft hair brushes past my cheek,
her head is on my chest;
the singer sings,
I’m feeling things
I never would have guessed.

Before too long, the lights are up,
we feel the moment pass,
she smiles and says she’ll see me
Monday morning, back in class.
I’m glad I came here after all.
I’m glad I took a chance –
‘cause now I’m looking forward to…

the next last dance.

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© 2012, Matt Forrest Esenwine

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15 thoughts on “Poetry Friday: “First Last Dance”

  1. Oh those pangs of adolescence. Nice job!

  2. What a sweet, honest poem. It deserves to be in a book still. Maybe another opportunity will come along for it to dance. Hope so.

  3. Jessica Bigi on said:

    This is wonderful makes me think of my high school dance thank you the fellow I went with was a good friend and he passed away few years egos we had wa wonderful time the night

  4. margaretsmn on said:

    I remember those dances, the awkward feelings. I can even remember the feeling of the first last dance. A formative time. I also love the form you used, very easy going, yet rhyming freely. I admire anyone who can rhyme without forcing it.

  5. All those tough feelings are there, Matt. I love that last line. I think it deserves to be in a book, too.

  6. Nicely done, Matt. Those raw and vulnerable feelings come across loud and clear!

  7. You captured the uncertainties and surprises of middle/high school perfectly!

  8. Kathy Brodsky on said:

    What a fantastic poem!!

    All of us can relate to it.

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