Let’s be honest; if the title of this blog post doesn’t compel you to read it, nothing will…
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Life and Death on the Living Room Rug
He should never have strayed.
Away from the herd, he was
vulnerable; young, naïve to the ways
of the enemy.
Stumbling clumsily
across carpet braids, searching for food
on this ancient Asian plain, he had no idea
what lay in wait.
From behind thick trunks of coffee
table forest,
two plastic Velociraptors attack
hapless Hadrosaur;
one bites at his back, the other
uses sickle-claws
to tear his sides.
Unexpected to all,
the Tyrant King arrives
(perched atop Grave Digger, appropriately),
spies the bloodless carnage,
disperses speedy thieves
with a toddler-sized roar,
and enjoys a duck-billed dinosaur dinner
before bedtime.
– © 2017, Matt Forrest Esenwine, all rights reserved
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I wrote this little slice o’ life as a tribute to the imagination of my 7-year-old son – a budding truck-driving, superhero paleontology artist- and also as a way to practice some internal rhyme. Hope you liked it! For more poetry, be sure to visit Penny Parker Klostermann for today’s complete Poetry Friday roundup!
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I’m trying to get an image of Grave Digger and failing. What a vast imagination your son (and you) have.
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Thanks, Brenda! Here’s Grave Digger, life-size: http://www.blogcdn.com/www.citysbest.com/media/2011/01/gravedigger1.jpg
My son’s version is just a little bit smaller. 😉
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Wow. That is zombie-amazing!
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What a fun poem. You were right about the title. How could anyone resist reading on after that?
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Ha, thanks, Kay!
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Fun to be transported into the world of a 7-year-old’s imagination. I love how intensely kids play. Great poem!
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Thank you so much, Jama!
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Love a toddler-sized roar! So enjoyable, Matt!
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Thanks, B.J.!
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I had a good laugh when the dinos came on the scene. Thanks for the kids’-eye view.
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Thank you, Laura. I’ve been keeping an eye on your Feb. Daily Poem project, although I’ve been too busy to be able to participate…glad to see you’ve been having a great response, though!
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Great fun! They are amazing at that age. The things they can think up!
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An imagination as boundless as the sky!
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It’s simply wonderful to listen to the words, and you captured it beautifully, Matt. I love the unusual, but truthful, “bloodless carnage”. Just great!
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Thank you, Linda, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Ha! TOO fun, Matt. I remember when my son, now going on 22, created havoc and mischief with his little Gravedigger truck. Love that it teamed up with dinosaurs. Poor Hadrosaur!
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Thanks, Robyn – got to love the scenarios kids can come up with!
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Much more enjoyable than the image I first conjured with your title…haha. I reread for internal rhymes and must congratulate you … bravo all around! Grandkids on the way here… soon my own drama will play out!
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Glad I surprised you, Karen, thanks!
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Great poem Matt. I could see the game being played out on your rug.
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Thank you, Sally!
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Thanks for reminding us about kids and their imagination! I really enjoyed your poem and the humor in the ending.
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Thanks, Penny…I don’t think I’d write half as much as I do without my kids around!
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Very fun!
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Thanks, Mary Lee!
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There’s nothing like a seven year old imagination! I love this!
Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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