My wife snapped the photo above this past Wednesday, a few hours after the kids had come home from their second day of the new school year. Since it has been unseasonably hot these past few days – and since the schools have no air conditioning (here in New Hampshire, we don’t need it) – we thought they might enjoy a quick trip to a local lake to cool off and relax.
My thanks to fellow New Hampshirite Diane Mayr, who has been writing so many cheritas of late that I finally decided I needed to write my first one! A cherita, to define it, is a poetic form in the tradition of haiku and tanka, but is different in that it need not be as lyrical and emotionally-surprising, and is written to tell a story. It consists of 3 stanzas made up of 1, 2, and 3 lines, respectively.
Of course, there’s more poetry to be found! Robyn Hood Black is hosting today’s Poetry Friday roundup at her blog, Life on the Deckle Edge, so head on over for all the poetry links and info!
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Love the poem and photo. I especially love the “hold on with freshwater fingers.” Enjoy every moment!
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Thanks, Kimberly – we’re holding onto each moment as tightly as we can!
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Yes – those “freshwater fingers” are magic! Terrific photo, too. Thanks for sharing, Matt, and best wishes to your family as a new circus – I mean, school year – begins! :0)
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Ha, yes, it’s a new circus – but with both kids out of the house now, I might actually find time to write a little more! I do miss the little girl, but I’m looking forward to having more time!
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I know things are different since both are in school now, love those “freshwater fingers”, to hold on to! I wrote about a clinging to summer too. Best wishes for a wonderful autumn, Matt.
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Thanks, Linda! I’ll try to check out your post as soon as I can!
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Thanks for the shout-out, Matt! I’m happy you decided to give the form a try. Well done, and I look forward to reading more.
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Thank you, Diane – for the kind words as well as for intruding me to the form. I like it!
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Lovely cherita and photo. I hope the weather cools off soon. I remember getting out of school early because of the heat. Way back then most schools weren’t air conditioned even in North Carolina. Those early September afternoons were brutal.
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Wow, I’ll bet they were…especially in NC! Thank you, Kay!
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What a terrific way to cool off after a hot day at school. The cherita form is new to me. I’ll have to explore it a bit more. Love those freshwater fingers. Was the line inspired by the picture?
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Thanks, Ramona! Yes, I wrote the cherita based on the photo, so those freshwater fingers would have existed had my kids not been enjoying the lake. Got to love how things work out.
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“Freshwater fingers” – lovely! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Ruth!
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You sold me on the cherita style. I have got to try my hand at it. Your story is beautifully woven. I like the design and the flow of the words so much that I would like to add this to my summer gallery, Matt.
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Thank you so much, Carol. Absolutely – feel free to use it!
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Yes, the freshwater fingers was a good line. Adorable photo, too.
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Thanks, Brenda, I appreciate it.
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Holding on with freshwater fingers is a delightful surprise full of emotion as well as story.
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Thank you, Margaret! That phrase did really capture my attention as soon as it popped into my head.
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Beautiful poem and lovely image Matt–breathtaking lake too, thanks!
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Thanks, Michelle! We’re fortunate to live in an area where lakes like this are so close to home – only 15-20 minutes away.
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I love this Matt! My kids don’t go back to school here in NY until Thursday, so I am holding on tightly with my “freshwater fingers”. I visit Great Pond in Maine once a year, but didn’t get there this summer, and your beautiful photo is making me nostalgic for the lake. I hope your children have a wonderful school year.
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Thank you so much! I’m sorry I’m just getting to respond now, as I was busy working all weekend at the local state fair…but I hope your kids had a good first day.
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