Poetry Friday: Practicing the Sedoka

I was doing research on haiku and other forms of Japanese poetry recently when I came upon the sedoka – a very, very early poetic form. Although the sedoka is rarely seen these days, it’s been around since Japan was still using Chinese characters in their written language! I had played around with the form a few years ago,but had forgotten about it until now – so I’m grateful for this ‘accidental’ inspiration.

Rather than getting into a long explanation of what a sedoka is, I invite you to visit THIS LINK to learn more. Simply put, a sedoka is made up of two tercets (3-line stanzas) which ‘converse’ with each other; that is, the first sets up a scene and the second responds to it by connecting the reader to an emotion. In this way, a sedoka is sort of a cross between a haiku and senryu – although both of those forms are much, much more recent creations than the sedoka.

The form intrigued me, not only because of this blending of nature with human emotion, but because it allows the writer a bit more room to work than a haiku or senryu. (The sedoka has a syllable count of 5-7-7, which is similar to these, but because Japanese “syllables” are not the same as those in the English language, one need not adhere strictly to this rule)

So after some thought, some scribbling, and more than a revision or two, I present my first sedoka:

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Probably not the best sedoka ever written – certainly not on par with Kakinomoto Hitomaro, the Master of the sedoka – but I’m happy with it as a first try!

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31 thoughts on “Poetry Friday: Practicing the Sedoka

  1. Linda Mitchell

    Oh, I’m in! thank you for the explanation of the form and the inspiration with your pretty-darn-good-actually-awesome first try. Like a bandit, I’m taking this idea and running with it.

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  2. amyludwigvanderwater

    “stillness shaken” – yes.
    Thank you for this moment and too, for sharing this form. I love its name and will check out your link to learning more. Happy Poetry Friday!!

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  3. margaretsmn

    Thanks for teaching me about a new to me old form. Gotta try this one. Yours drew me in to the moment of morning rising and trumpets sounding.

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  4. lindabaie

    I like that ‘stillness shaken’ & your explanation of the sedoka, too, Matt. Sometimes I wake & wonder what sound did ‘shake me’. Your poem reminded me of that. Lovely words with the picture, too.

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  5. I’ve tried writing sedoka before (in fact I have one in a poetry collection I’m currently trying to sell), but I never thought about the two stanzas being in conversation. That sheds new light on this form for me. Thanks for sharing, Matt!

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    1. Thank you for stopping by! I wish I knew where that scene is from…it was a photo I came across on Photobucket. After I’d decided on my subject, I wrote the poem, then went off in search of an appropriate image to tie it together!

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  6. Thanks for your explanation of sedoka and the link. I love the deceptive simplicity of this new-to-me form. Yours is a lovely poem–and an inspiring mentor text. I’m always rapt by dawn and all that stirs and shakes in those early morning hours.

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  7. Cool form! I like the conversationality of it.
    My husband spent a lot of time in NH growing up and my MIL lives there now, so I have seen mornings like what you are describing. (Maybe the ears aren’t as deaf as you think?)

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