This post was originally published way back in Dec. 2012, just 5 months after I had first started this blog. As our family gears up for our annual trip over to York Beach, Maine, I was contemplating my life, and my wife, and my kids, and Covid, and all the things we’ve gone through this past year…and I remembered this poem. With summer almost upon us, I felt like it was the perfect time to share it again, in case you hadn’t seen it the first time around!
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For my final Poetry Friday post of the year, I’m sharing a fairly new poem that I completed just a few weeks ago. I wrote this for my wife, Jen, and since it describes a muggy, summer evening, I thought it might help to melt some of the heavy, wet snow that fell in this part of the country yesterday.
This is a tanka, pretty much the only surviving form of waka, a term that once encompassed many forms of Japanese poetry. You may notice that the first three lines are similar to a haiku, with their 5-7-5 syllabic structure; however, haikus are a relatively new form of poetry, having been developed in the 19th century (haikus were borne of the original hokku form, which dates to the 1600s, but waka forms go back to the 6th century).
By the way, this week I learned that the Japanese word haijin means either a crippled person, or a haiku poet. Makes sense.
So now that your history and vocab lessons are over, on to the poetry!
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With her, at midnight
Within the warm, thick
soup of night clouds and orchids,
breaths heavy as air
silence jealous crickets; stars
glisten skin, damp and moonlit.
– © 2012 Matt Forrest Esenwine,
all rights reserved
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How’s this for coincidence: Carol Wilcox is hosting today’s complete Poetry Friday roundup with a spotlight on poet Jeannette Encinias at her blog, Carol’s Corner – and would you believe it was Carol who was hosting Poetry Friday 9 years ago, when I first published this post! That’s right, I shared my post on her 2012 roundup! Crazy, isn’t it??
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Nice job, Matt! Thanks for the definition of haijin, too. I can see why “crippled person” applies–someone who is having trouble moving goes more slowly–is more aware of her surroundings–just like a haiku poet!
Happy 21013!
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I love soup, night clouds, and orchids.
I’ll need more time to digest that translation.
Happy New Year.
Liz
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I like the doubleness in this poem: “clouds” and “orchids” in a soup; “silence” as noun and verb; our skin as a single glistening.
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I love dmayr’s description of a poem that moves slowly, that picks its way carefully through an image. My partner is a plant ecologist, so I also loved the reference to the orchids. Amazingly cool plants whose own approach to life appears to be anything but careful!
http://www.environmentalgraffiti.com/news-dramatic-and-amazing-sex-life-orchids
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Thank you all for your comments! And Steve, I knew orchids had a reputation, but I need a cold shower after reading that article…whew!
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I know, Matt, me, too! But seriously, thanks again for such a treat. I love reading your poems. So few words that do so much work.
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Glad you like them, Steve…and thank YOU for taking the time to stop by & comment!
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Thanks for the information about tanka and haiku. Your wife is one lucky gal to have a husband who writes poetry for her!
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Thanks, Carol…everyone and everything is fodder for a poem!
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Lovely, Matt. I keep getting told off by my wife for writing about trees and stuff, rather than writing odes to her!!
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Well, next time she complains that you wrote about a tree, tell her it’s allegorical. That’ll keep her thinking long enough to keep you out of the doghouse!
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It’s hard to remember hot nights and crickets! Thanks for bringing them back in your poem!
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You’re welcome, Mary Lee! Thanks for stopping by.
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Beautiful, Matt! Well done.
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Thanks, Tabatha – glad you liked it.
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It’s so special to write for your wife, & then publish for all to see too. It’s lovely, and loving, to say you’re making the crickets jealous. I like the idea of it very much.
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Thank you for the kind words, Linda. Writing children’s poetry is immensely enjoyable to me, but now & then it’s good to let the adult out to play!
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Those first two lines were especially gorgeous – so sensuous and engulfing. And thank you for all the information about Japanese poetry – there is so much to learn, so many forms with which to speak!
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Sensuous was, indeed, what I was going for…so I’m glad it worked for you, Tara!
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Wonderful and evocative. Thanks for sharing again. Enjoy your time in Maine!!
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Thank you, Jama!
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I won’t stop liking your love poem, Matt. This time, ‘glistens’ stands out to me, a word of celebration! Happy vacation!
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Thanks so much, Linda!
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Your poem does sound like a muggy summer evening. And love, and a bit like a lullaby. Love this line:
soup of night clouds and orchids
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Thank you, Denise – I was defintely trying to get “muggy” across!
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This one is pretty steamy, in more ways than one! ❤ Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Ha, thanks, Ruth!
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Quite a romantic poem! Have a good time in Maine, one of my favorite spots that I would like to return to someday.
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Thanks so much, Janice!
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