As I mentioned on Tuesday, the world’s biggest children’s poetry competition is underway, and I hope you’ve been following it! (If not, you can learn more HERE)
Once again, I am out in the first round – not sure how that always happens – but I do know my competitor, Alison Dellenbaugh, wrote a cute little poem about Bigfoot that won the hearts of the voters, and I wish her well as she moves on to round 2!
Madness!Poetry, as the contest is called, is a bracketed competition similar to sports brackets, where we start off with 64 teams (or in this case, “authletes”), and after the first round that number is whittled down to 32…then 16…then 8…and 4…until we have two finalists vying for the championship.
So today I thought I’d share the poem I wrote – since I’m out of contention, I’m a spectator now, without the pressure of having to create a winning poem with some random word in 36 hours. I was given the word “behemoth,” and when I thought about how it’s a word meaning some giant ‘thing,’ I immediately thought of an old tale we all know…
A Lesson in Brevity
A young lad named Jack cultivated legumes,
which germinated thaumaturgically.
He met a behemoth hungry for bones
who tried to remove them non-surgically.
Jack quickly absconded down tall vegetation
and thought he might nearly prevail –
but poor dear old Jack was a sesquipedalian
and took too long telling his tale.
– © 2017, Matt F. Esenwine, all rights reserved
I had a feeling that my abundant use of verbose language might be my undoing, but once I nailed down my plan – and punchline – I knew I was going to need to pull out the trusty ol’ thesaurus. And win or lose, I really liked how the poem turned out, and that was the important thing to me.
So be sure to check out all the action (and vote!) at the Madness!Poetry website, and if you’re looking for more poetry, visit Michelle H. Barnes at Today’s Little Ditty for the complete Poetry Friday roundup!
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Sorry you didn’t win, Matt, but I do really like your clever verbosity. Certainly made me smile 🙂
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Thank you, Sally, I’m glad you liked it!
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You did well, Matt, and made many a reader pull out her dictionary!
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Thanks, Jane! I hoped it would be educational, if nothing else!
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Matt, it’s always a pleasure to have you. As long time Cubs or Red Sox fans (used to) say, “There’s always next year!”
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Thank you, Ed – especially for all the work and effort you put into revamping this crazy thing! I just wish there was a way you could participate!
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Too bad, Matt. I was looking forward to another round from you this year! I wonder if you had used a more obvious title (referencing Jack and the Beanstalk) if you would have gotten a better response…? I have a feeling the kids didn’t even know you were retelling a familiar story because they were too hung up on the big words. Still, you win the Roget cleverness award!
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Thanks, Michelle! As I’ve mentioned before, I knew going into this poem that it might be over the heads of too many kids…but I was having too much fun writing it!
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I’m sharing my poem today, too, Matt! It’s a fun tournament! And there were so many great poems out there! I’m pleased to have participated and competed… someone’s got to go out first, right? I liked your tongue twisting, dictionary toting behemoth!
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Thanks, Donna – and congrats to you, as well, on a hard-fought battle!
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I liked your poem, Matt, & voted for it! It’s a mystery as to which poems move people, and which do not so much. Anyway, I’m glad you were there in the competition!
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Thanks, Linda, I appreciate that! I was disappointed not seeing your name in the matchups…you’ll have to apply next year!
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I was just too busy to try this time, Matt. I do love seeing all the poems, and that it’s back!
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A definite lesson in brevity. It was a fun read. Sorry to hear you didn’t win, but just the same i enjoyed this verbose poem.
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Thank you, Myra!
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Wow, those are some fantastic words! I need to pull out my trusty thesaurus, too!! 🙂
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…or just glance at past MMPoetry matchups! 😉
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Made me smile, Matt! I love “tried to remove them non-surgically.” ha!
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Ha, thanks! When one uses a word like ‘thaumaturgically,’ ones rhyming options immediately become quite limited!
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Your poem is quite a mouthful. Glad you enjoyed the experience!!
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Thanks, Jama, it was fun as always!
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It sounds like you came out a winner regardless of the vote! I did, too as I just spent some time looking up words and expanding my vocabulary. Thanks for sharing your impressive effort!
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Thank you, Molly! Any opportunity to write is time well spent!
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Ah HA! I feel so silly……it took me some extra careful LOOKING at the top of your blog to figure out how to comment. I haven’t been able to figure out that simple thing for way too long. I do appreciate a lover of words. My love of words has been my undoing as well. The big words are just so fun! Sorry you got knocked out but awed by your panache for trying. Great poem….I mean come on, “non-surgically?” wow!
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Well, I’m glad you were able to comment, Linda! Thank you for the kind words – I really appreciate it.
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A fun and clever poem, Matt! I would love to hear you read it. I know you’ll peacefully enjoy the rest of the competition from the sidelines.
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Thanks, Violet…yes, I’m watching from the bleachers now, but glad to have been a part of it!
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I love to learn new words, many thanks for thaumaturgically! By the way, did you get any library responses to my post on FB?
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Thanks for stopping by, Diane! I don’t think I recall seeing any post…what did it say? And no, I haven’t had any contact me.
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I really love your entry! Sorry you’re out so soon! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Ruth!
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Man, a twist on a classic tale should have done better! Trying to follow the competition this year but having a hard time keeping up. Better luck next year!
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Thanks, Heidi. I’ve been so busy this weekend I haven’t even seen anyone’s PF posts, let alone the Madness posts…going to try to catch up tonight!
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